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May 31, 2009 at 11:57 am
· Filed under Observations and tagged: balance, balance at the park in june, Communication, contemplating, contemplation, conversation, cordieb, Gee, june, moon, park, peace, Spirituality, sun, wine

Balance -CordieB
Late evening contemplation in the park
sipping wine till light turns dark
picking minds and hearts apart
gazing at the wonderment of Sun’s retreat
as Moon assumes command; taking seat…
Sending Troup de Breezes; defeating stagnant heat
Mindless peeping as lovers fuss or swoon…
to birdie’s perfect God-sent tune…
Life’s balance at the park in June
Written by CordieB
Quote for the Day…”All is Fair in Love and War” ~John Lyly’s ‘Euphues’ (1578)??
Submitted for simply snickers prompt. This week’s prompt words are: peep, park, pick.
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Nice! I love the way the balanced meters in your verse echo the balance of the theme you present.
Thanks for participating.
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Gives me a stronger sense of summer than the windy day I’m living right now.
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tobeme wrote @ June 1, 2009 at 4:23 pm
Lovely! I was there every time I read your words!
Molly wrote @ June 2, 2009 at 1:13 pm
Your words inspire in me the desire to be in the Park in June…
Duma Key wrote @ June 2, 2009 at 1:21 pm
Sweet sentiments, and strong words. Great post, feels like summer with in your words
cordieb wrote @ June 2, 2009 at 4:20 pm
@DumaKey. I’m glad you enjoyed this. Summer brings forth warmth…something we all can use at times. PLL, C.
cordieb wrote @ June 2, 2009 at 4:21 pm
@Molly. Isn’t the park just wonderful in June? Hope you had a wonderful trip!!! PLL, C.
cordieb wrote @ June 2, 2009 at 4:22 pm
@Tobeme. I’m happy to have assisted on your spring visit to the park.
PLL, C.
cordieb wrote @ June 2, 2009 at 4:24 pm
@ Aliceautreywrite. Thanks!! Super award. I’ve got to paste it as soon as I get the chance. Thanks as always for your postive comments!!!
Gee wrote @ June 3, 2009 at 12:15 pm
Very loverly post.
Balance, and with balance, brings peace. I see peace in this portrait, along with the balance. It looks complete and real. Tremendous. What you capture in your creations and your words really touches me deeply. Thanks for that! Vanessa
cordieb wrote @ June 7, 2009 at 5:20 pm
@Gee. Thank you baby!
cordieb wrote @ June 7, 2009 at 5:23 pm
@Vanessa. Thank You, Sis. You always make me smile with your comments. Mwah!
Beautiful poem and picture, loved it!!
I also love the Muddy Road story Cordie, I must confess i find this particular wordpress design slightly disorienting, but you have filled every inch with something beautiful, and when i run through it patiently, its quite awesome, im tempted to try it too!
enreal wrote @ June 12, 2009 at 2:14 pm
This is sweet… I felt the energy of these words… they made me smile. Thank you my friend
cordieb wrote @ June 27, 2009 at 10:18 pm
@Enreal. . . Thanks for the most inspiring words, as always!!!!
PLL, C.
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