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Balance at the Park in June

June 1, 2010 at 11:57 am · Filed under Observations and tagged: balance, balance at the park in june, Communication, contemplating, contemplation, conversation, cordieb, Gee, june, moon, park, peace, Spirituality, sun, wine

Balance -CordieB

Late evening contemplation in the park

sipping wine till light turns dark

picking minds and hearts apart

gazing at the wonderment of Sun’s retreat

as Moon assumes command; taking seat…

Sending Troup de Breezes; defeating stagnant heat

Mindless peeping as lovers fuss or swoon…

to birdie’s perfect God-sent tune…

‘Tis Life’s balance at the park in June

Written by CordieB

Quote for the Day…”All is Fair in Love and War” ~John Lyly’s ‘Euphues’ (1578)??

Submitted for simply snickers prompt. This week’s prompt words are: peep, park, pick.

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19 Comments

At 2009.05.31 13:49, nickersandink said:

Nice! I love the way the balanced meters in your verse echo the balance of the theme you present.

Thanks for participating.

Next week’s prompt is up!

SIMPLY SNICKERS – weekly poetry prompts

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At 2009.06.01 14:47, aliceaudrey said:

Gives me a stronger sense of summer than the windy day I’m living right now.

I have an award for you.

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At 2009.06.01 16:23, tobeme said:

Lovely! I was there every time I read your words!

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At 2009.06.02 13:13, Molly said:

Your words inspire in me the desire to be in the Park in June…

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At 2009.06.02 13:21, Duma Key said:

Sweet sentiments, and strong words. Great post, feels like summer with in your words

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At 2009.06.02 16:20, cordieb said:

@DumaKey. I’m glad you enjoyed this. Summer brings forth warmth…something we all can use at times. PLL, C.

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At 2009.06.02 16:21, cordieb said:

@Molly. Isn’t the park just wonderful in June? Hope you had a wonderful trip!!! PLL, C.

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At 2009.06.02 16:22, cordieb said:

@Tobeme. I’m happy to have assisted on your spring visit to the park. PLL, C.

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At 2009.06.02 16:24, cordieb said:

@ Aliceautreywrite. Thanks!! Super award. I’ve got to paste it as soon as I get the chance. Thanks as always for your postive comments!!!

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At 2009.06.03 12:15, Gee said:

Very loverly post.

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At 2009.06.03 12:44, vanessaleighsblog said:

Balance, and with balance, brings peace. I see peace in this portrait, along with the balance. It looks complete and real. Tremendous. What you capture in your creations and your words really touches me deeply. Thanks for that! Vanessa

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At 2009.06.07 17:20, cordieb said:

@Gee. Thank you baby!

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At 2009.06.07 17:23, cordieb said:

@Vanessa. Thank You, Sis. You always make me smile with your comments. Mwah!

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At 2009.06.11 07:45, Mental Mist said:

Beautiful poem and picture, loved it!!

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At 2009.06.11 07:49, Mental Mist said:

I also love the Muddy Road story Cordie, I must confess i find this particular wordpress design slightly disorienting, but you have filled every inch with something beautiful, and when i run through it patiently, its quite awesome, im tempted to try it too!

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At 2009.06.12 14:14, enreal said:

This is sweet… I felt the energy of these words… they made me smile. Thank you my friend

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At 2009.06.27 22:18, cordieb said:

@Enreal. . . Thanks for the most inspiring words, as always!!!! PLL, C.

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At 2010.06.04 14:06, Gail Eichinger said:

HI CORDIEB

I love sipping wine in the park – any time, June or November.

Lovely evening – thanks for sharing your delight.

Love to you my friend
Gail
peace and hope

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